Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:clap:
 


Waking up in modays gloom
in the single bed that used to have us two
Your smell still resting in my room.

Walking home at 8:45
Im just tempted to walk all through the night
And leave all of this behind

City lights are blinding tonight
but not as bright as the person i once knew
that lightend up the room

and im just waiting fro a sign
to postpone the outcome
And im still hoping that...

Youll find your way home
youll realise im home
youll find your way home
to find, to find what it was that you left behind.
©2006-2009 ~i-eat-pie
:iconi-eat-pie:

Author's Comments

this is my first submission in a long time. Tell me what you think.


Its kinda obvious what its about.

Comments


love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsilver-eyes-blue:
I think it's really good. But, for the sake of people like me who are sometimes struggling with english, I wish you didn't leave out all the signs, like ' in you'll.... That's just a little note, though, I like the poem all in all. :)

I'll give it a fav. :)

--
You might find after a time, that having is not nearly as fine a thing as wanting. (Spock)

Join the Heavenly Princesses Club: *Heavenly-Princesses , a club dedicated to the princess forms of the Sailor Senshi!
:iconi-eat-pie:
ok sure thing i'll remeber that for you!

--
Turn off the lights and turn off the shyness
Cause all of our moves make up for the silence
And oh, the way your makeup stains my pillowcase
Like I'll never be the same...
:iconlilrainbowjessi:
Love it.
Its definately a grrrrrrreat devart comeback, so to speak!

i like it lots.

--
Time's can't shine as bright as you.....
:iconi-eat-pie:
thanks hunny

--
Turn off the lights and turn off the shyness
Cause all of our moves make up for the silence
And oh, the way your makeup stains my pillowcase
Like I'll never be the same...
:iconi-eat-pie:
thanks hunny

--
Turn off the lights and turn off the shyness
Cause all of our moves make up for the silence
And oh, the way your makeup stains my pillowcase
Like I'll never be the same...

Details

November 30, 2006
711 bytes

Statistics

5
2 [who?]
65 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Site Map